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Ode for DA friends and T.shareMy heart goes out to your awesome expression of creativity,like the objects in shades in the spectrum of reality.A pool of sharing the work of art spreads joy and make our life whole,together with our passion, we seek out our lovely artistic soul.
Soulmate search in the seaI wish I could catch a fish eventually.I will throw my bait and I will wait & see patiently.
Your Best friend is yourselfTrue friend is yourselfYou can trust yourself.You can count your blessingsYou can listen your own advice.You can listen your heart.You can proud of yourself.You dont judge yourself.You dont lie to yourselfYou dont listen your negativityYourself doesnt hurt you.Yourself doesnt cheated you.You can control yourself.You can protect yourself.You can recognize your limitations & your mistakes.You can treat yourself lucky.You can HELP yourselfYou can LOVE yourself.You can RESPECT yourself.You will be blessed,and you will receive the god's blessings.Be firm.Be humble.Be yourself.
A Fatal trap of Cyberlove"Unsuspecting victims of cyberlove can be caught in a trap with a virus within its wall.""Just say NO!"
GenerosityIf your palm is open and you are giving,you will also receive god's blessings.
Ode for Human HeartMy heart is inside my deep cavern,Blood flowing like the clear stream endlessly.Such an unique art pieceTirelessly working to sustain my life.Every beat is a breath.Just like a symphony.Cleansing my soul within,Energizing my bodySurely you are the river of life.The symbol of passionAnd how I am being blessed.
Kelly's BellyThis is the story of a girl who grewHer hair was blonde, her eyes were blueYoung and pretty, her name was KellyAll she wanted was a big round bellyHer friend was smart, made her a pillOne to make her stomach fillShe let the pill slide down her throatThen felt herself begin to bloatNext her tummy rounded outHer cheeks puffed up and made her poutHer top was stretched, it was too smallto cover her belly, now a big round ballYou'd think she had too much to eatShe could no longer see her feetShe rubbed her belly, felt it growWondered when she'd start to slowBut there was no end to her inflationAlthough she quite liked this sensationShe grew to many times her sizeAnd there was panic in her eyesHer friend realised something was wrongThe pill she'd made was way too strongAs Kelly floated from the groundHer belly made a creaking soundHer friend said sorry she had to goBut Kelly was about to blowNow alone she filled the roomReached her limit and went kaboom
Inflation DayI walked into my roomPulled out some loose clothing to wearThen I went into my closetAnd pulled out a large tank of air.I stuck the hose in my bellybuttonI said "This is going to be great!"I went to the airtankAnd turned the knob up to eight.I felt the air enter my bodyI had hoped it would soonThat's when it actually happenedI was inflating like a balloon!My belly was getting rounderI poked it once or twiceMy whole body was getting enormousThe feeling was very nice.However, I was quickly losing mobilityI was bigger in width than heightSoon, I was feeling lots of pressureAnd my belly feels really tight.I tried to pull the hose outUnfortunately, it was stuckAnd now I can't move to reach the airtankWell great, just my luck....The expanding feeling is just too greatI don't really think I want to stop....However, I'm starting to feel pretty fullAnd now I think I'm going to pop!!!!
IndependenceOnce the wind caught on the seaAnd its dress snagged upon the crestsLike a girl who couldn't help fallingFor a boy with too many cracksThen the wind tumbled between the wavesCrashing with the water when it couldn't find the sky.I always wanted to live in the sky,Wrap clouds around me--dip myself into the sea--And wander into roaring wavesOf emptiness; Rush as the sun crestsRush like wind and water into the cracksOf myself, so that maybe I'll stop fallingFor people who can't keep themselves from fallingDown, and who won't quit looking at the skySo they can avoid all the cracksIn the sidewalk as they weave through a people-sea.Well, I'm not used to riding the crestsOf others' success; I'll make my own waves.So though my hair falls down in amber wavesI fear the strands will keep on fallingAnd my white-wash hands in lunar crestsWon't show you a spacious skyUnless you want to seeThrough star-spangled cracks.Eyes and eggshells shattered, tiny cracksAnd the tears stre
Fallen AngelFallen AngelCrawling in my forlorn appearanceI hide my soul behind these tattered wingsTattered and broken as they arePlucked of light, stained in tears and blood.In quiet despair upon the cold earthSmeared in dirt I crouch upon my weary kneesAnd clutched timidly between my fingersRests one last jewel of Hope.A single unblemished plume pluckedFrom the silver light of dawnA feathered ray of light from beyondTo illuminate the void that has me bound.This precious barb of silkOnce lost as I was and forgottenBlazes now to immerse me in radiant blissTo wash away the pain, draw me from the abyss.So now I fade away…My tender flesh removedMy shattered wings releasedMy inner light unsheathed… escapes.(c)2004 Joseph Palladino
WerewolvesWEREWOLVESA bitter biteOf pale moonlightA shiver of painBeast overcomes brainFickle and furryThrough the trees they hurryAir full of criesMoon reflecting eyesSilver and whiteHowls in the night
how can someone like you want someone like meis it with heartyou wish to starta tangle of you and me,not just of skinor place withinto just feel less lonely;and how on earthcould i be worththat space you wish to fillfor a body, tightno vacancies at nighti fear it stays empty still.
Creepypasta ABC'sA is for Abby, who has a creepy stalkerB is for BEN, he drowned in some waterC is for Cupcakes, which you'll just die to eatD is for Dating Game, beware of who you'll meetE is for Eyeless Jack, he wants to slash you openF is for Funnymouth, who'll leave your jaw brokenG is for Guardian Angel, he's always with youH is for Humans, and they can lick tooI is for Ickbarr Bigelsteine, your teeth he will keepJ is for Jeff the Killer, who tells you to go to sleepK is for Killswitch, a game impossible to findL is for Lavender Town, the music messes with your mindM is for Misfortune, a hidden game within a gameN is for No End House, which lives up to its nameO is for On the Bus, you'll be riding foreverP is for Penpal, they can be oh so cleverQ is for Quiet Room, a film with a cursed TV spotR is for Russian Sleep Experiment, more sinister than we thoughtS is for Slender Man, wearing a black suit and tieT is for Trust, who shall live, and who shall die?U is for Unbranded Lapto
Anti-EmoYou live to love.You love to give.You give your love.Your love is big.Your big heart smiles.Your smile is bright.Your brightness blinds.You're blind to spite.You spit at hate.You hate to cry.You cry to love.Your love is fate.Your fate is real.You really try.You try to love.To love, you'd die.
Wolf's CryA wolf basks beneath the night,Gasping the air below the moons light,Howling at the rays of midnight sky,Bewildering the moment with an inner sigh,I stand alone
In the darkness of this rugged land,Where nothing can go hand in hand,Staring into the sky through eyes wistfully,Into a realm where I can never be truly,Be on my own
Once I belonged to a pack,Where trails of footprints go in track,As we ventured into the mountains bliss,Where nothing can be seen in the abyss,I felt so alone
At a time when I needed them most,My brethren were in the forest lost,As I journeyed through the woods of Faerie,Lost in the sensation of a moonlight ferry,This is
For all the brethren who had lied,For every lone wolf who had died,For the hunt where we never succeeded,For the forest we had never seceded,For the lost that will never be bribed.As I wail a lupine howl through the night sky,An answer to the moon, this is my wo
Your smileEverytime I see your serene face,Im a captive of your smile.That subtle, endearing smile uplifts me.