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Ode for DA friends and T.shareMy heart goes out to your awesome expression of creativity,like the objects in shades in the spectrum of reality.A pool of sharing the work of art spreads joy and make our life whole,together with our passion, we seek out our lovely artistic soul.
Soulmate search in the seaI wish I could catch a fish eventually.I will throw my bait and I will wait & see patiently.
Your Best friend is yourselfTrue friend is yourselfYou can trust yourself.You can count your blessingsYou can listen your own advice.You can listen your heart.You can proud of yourself.You dont judge yourself.You dont lie to yourselfYou dont listen your negativityYourself doesnt hurt you.Yourself doesnt cheated you.You can control yourself.You can protect yourself.You can recognize your limitations & your mistakes.You can treat yourself lucky.You can HELP yourselfYou can LOVE yourself.You can RESPECT yourself.You will be blessed,and you will receive the god's blessings.Be firm.Be humble.Be yourself.
A Fatal trap of Cyberlove"Unsuspecting victims of cyberlove can be caught in a trap with a virus within its wall.""Just say NO!"
Dumb and Dumber"How did you get so stupid?""Oh! I learned more quickly...from you! What's your excuse?""I learned more quickly than you!""Oh, i give you the honor!"Cheers!
GenerosityIf your palm is open and you are giving,you will also receive god's blessings.
Ode for Human HeartMy heart is inside my deep cavern,Blood flowing like the clear stream endlessly.Such an unique art pieceTirelessly working to sustain my life.Every beat is a breath.Just like a symphony.Cleansing my soul within,Energizing my bodySurely you are the river of life.The symbol of passionAnd how I am being blessed.
Resolving ConflictsDo not find fault.Resolve an argument by finding remedies. Cursing, shouting and name-calling will only breed resentment.
Autumn Depression - updatedFragments of Golden Autumn,In this late cold afternoon,The Summer is coming to an end,Fall is just around the bend,Pretty leaves are falling on the ground,There's orange, red, yellow and golden brown,Makes me feel melancholic though,I wish the bitter cold will not be my foe!
SchoolIt’s like I’m trapped within a cageThe synchronized turning of every pageBeing forced to stand on a stageThese people all fill me with rage“I could easily destroy this placeTo find me they would have to chaseI could turn the walls into rubble-”OH SH-! They heard me! Now I’m in trouble!The class writing about a book we readAs another part of my soul drops deadBut I’m too distracted by the clocks tick“Mum I can’t go today, I’m sick…Cough, cough.”
Fallen AngelFallen AngelCrawling in my forlorn appearanceI hide my soul behind these tattered wingsTattered and broken as they arePlucked of light, stained in tears and blood.In quiet despair upon the cold earthSmeared in dirt I crouch upon my weary kneesAnd clutched timidly between my fingersRests one last jewel of Hope.A single unblemished plume pluckedFrom the silver light of dawnA feathered ray of light from beyondTo illuminate the void that has me bound.This precious barb of silkOnce lost as I was and forgottenBlazes now to immerse me in radiant blissTo wash away the pain, draw me from the abyss.So now I fade away…My tender flesh removedMy shattered wings releasedMy inner light unsheathed… escapes.(c)2004 Joseph Palladino
Kelly's BellyThis is the story of a girl who grewHer hair was blonde, her eyes were blueYoung and pretty, her name was KellyAll she wanted was a big round bellyHer friend was smart, made her a pillOne to make her stomach fillShe let the pill slide down her throatThen felt herself begin to bloatNext her tummy rounded outHer cheeks puffed up and made her poutHer top was stretched, it was too smallto cover her belly, now a big round ballYou'd think she had too much to eatShe could no longer see her feetShe rubbed her belly, felt it growWondered when she'd start to slowBut there was no end to her inflationAlthough she quite liked this sensationShe grew to many times her sizeAnd there was panic in her eyesHer friend realised something was wrongThe pill she'd made was way too strongAs Kelly floated from the groundHer belly made a creaking soundHer friend said sorry she had to goBut Kelly was about to blowNow alone she filled the roomReached her limit and went kaboom
Happy BirthdayHappy Birthday to you,Violets are blue,And with these things still said,Roses are red.So I want you to know,I've a friendship to show,You've helped me through life,Through sadness and strife.You made my day,I've too much to say,I love you my friend,Til the end.
MoonlessThe moonless eveningturns its back against the skyand leaves it empty.Perhaps the morningwill come back with its hands full,holding up the sun.
Inflation DayI walked into my roomPulled out some loose clothing to wearThen I went into my closetAnd pulled out a large tank of air.I stuck the hose in my bellybuttonI said "This is going to be great!"I went to the airtankAnd turned the knob up to eight.I felt the air enter my bodyI had hoped it would soonThat's when it actually happenedI was inflating like a balloon!My belly was getting rounderI poked it once or twiceMy whole body was getting enormousThe feeling was very nice.However, I was quickly losing mobilityI was bigger in width than heightSoon, I was feeling lots of pressureAnd my belly feels really tight.I tried to pull the hose outUnfortunately, it was stuckAnd now I can't move to reach the airtankWell great, just my luck....The expanding feeling is just too greatI don't really think I want to stop....However, I'm starting to feel pretty fullAnd now I think I'm going to pop!!!!
Manipulation of Thine EyesHow your eyes entrance the very recesses of my vulnerable heart.You whisper such contracts that charm the very core of my vitality.Perhaps it is just an anecdote-all the bountiful delectation I witness before me.No, I must remain firm from thine voice of falsehood and cloaked veracity!Oh, but the temptations of being precipitated into this state of control is becoming too grand! Too grand!Stay back, lying fiend!I have disintegrated these transparent chains around thy will.Still-and even so-I shan’t dismiss from mind your stipulation nor shall I obliterate those entrancive orbs that are your eyes.
Mining- A Minecraft PoemGive me a pickaxe; I’m feeling real brave.I’ll go out today and I'll look for a cave.It could be as simple as a hole in the ground,Doesn’t matter as long as there’s loot to be found.Give me some torches; I’ll need them for light,For deep underground it is dark as night.Fetch me my sword, for monsters abound.Think creepers and spiders and zombies all round.I chance upon iron, an ore of pale brown.There are monsters around me, can’t let my guard down.A zombie approaches, but I stand in good stead.I polish him off with three blows to his head.The cave is a labyrinth of turns and bends.There are long, winding passages and sudden dead ends.But I just keep on walking, because I’ve been toldThat deep in the cave lie redstone and gold.I see a ravine. It’s narrow and tall.Lava and water gush out from its walls.I begin my descent, one step at a time,Because one little slip would be such a crime.Just as I reach the ground from up
PoetryShe thinks the poet is to blame.She'll damn his words and then his name.She thinks all poems are a crime.She'll make him live between the lines.She'll damn his words and then his nameand eagerly await the shame;demand his head upon a plate -she seeks to sentence as his fate.She thinks all poems are a crime.They tease with wisdom, then with rhyme -a poet's final stab at wit,they make of him a hypocrite.She'll make him live between the linesnot knowing that the words he finds,those shifting letters in betweencan bring the lady to her knees.
Your smileEverytime I see your serene face,Im a captive of your smile.That subtle, endearing smile uplifts me.